Sunday, 2 July 2017

persuasive writing

        

                                  



In our class we were doing persuasive writing  about questions we feel are wrong and right i chose should girls be allowed to play on boys sports teams this is my argument.




Should girls be allowed to play on boys sports  Image result for sportteams?


                       Argument

I think that girls should be able to play on boys teams because…

statement 1 labels
statement 2 why are we different than boys playing sport

Statement 1 - labels
122 word paragraph

Firstly, girls are just as good as boys and sometimes can be better. Everyone thinks that girls aren't as good as boys but where all the same we're just different shapes and sizes we all work the same but girls get labeled as not good enough to play on boys teams. Girls can be twice as strong twice as fast and twice as fit but that  doesn't matter all that matters if you are boy not if you're good i think that it shouldn't matter if you're a girl  because at the end of the day girls are as good as boys.

Statement 2 - why are we different
than boys playing sport
74 word paragraph

People think that girls aren't as tough as boys but actually they're 100% wrong  girls can tackle,hit and throw the ball just like a boy.
But know the real question why are girls different at playing sport than boys for a long time people think that girls can’t play on boys teams because we aren't boys i disagree with that statement because girls have a voice and should use it girls are as good as boys.




Summary
38 word summary
In conclusion i proudly think that girls should be able to play on boys sports team and i hope this changes your mind about this argument and my reasons why girls should be able to play on boys sports teams

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