Redskin persuasive writing

In class mr b made us write a persuasive write about Redskins and why wedezerve one the three bestpieces od writing get a redskin hers mine

 Redskins are delicious and amazing they need to be shared to everyone and spread happiness and joy to our world because sharing is caring. Now I personally love redskins why you ask why not they are sweet and sugary plus there candy and I love candy Anyway this is why I think I should get a

redskin.

Everyday I work hard and enjoy my life I love learning but sometimes learning can be hard and you're brain starts shutting down and you can't work well, I have that everyday that's why i need an sugary,tasty treat to keep me going

Sometimes it's good to give kids sugar to keep them going and make them happy, and i haven't had an redskin in years but you mr Billing can change that every night, I dream that i would be lucky enough to  get an redskin but it never happens but why don't you mr Billing make my dreams come true's and give me an redskin out of the kindness of your heart that you may or may not have.

summary/conclusion

This mr Billings is why I think that i should get an redskin because I deserve it and I work hard and try my best plus would you rather eat them or make my dreams come true.